Hallo Leute,
ich habe hier einen Text, den ich selbst geschrieben habe.
Dies soll als Vorlage für einen 5 Min Vortrag dienen.
Ist etwas, sowohl inhaltlich als auch sprachlich zu verbessern?
D.h. wenn euch beispielsweise ein besserer Beginn einfällt, bitte bescheid sagen, danke schön!!
Our topic is the time step from the 1940th up to the 1960th.
So we will tell you something about the 2nd Wold War, the atomic bombs and the cold war.
The Second World War was the largest conflict in histoire, in which more than 55 mio. people died.
It started on the 1st September 1939 with the attack from Germany on Poland. Germany was run by Adolf Hitler. His ideology was to destroy all ethnic groups in the world and occupy their countries, especially the Jews.
But before he attacked Poland he signed a non-aggression pact with the Soviet Union. So there was no country which could defend Poland. After Poland Germany occupied the northern countries like Denmark and Norway than the southern ones like the North African countries, which where colonies of France and the United Kingdom and at least they spread out in the west and occupied the Benelux countries and a part of France.
Germany formed an alliance with Italy and Japan. These 3 countries were called the Axis Powers.
After that they cancelled the non-aggression pact with the Soviet Union and attacked them also.
Up to this time the Axis Powers were very successful and occupied many countries but Hitler did a logical mistake. He wanted to much and so at least there where to many countries against the Axis Powers.
In the Soviet Union they got their first defeat, because they were not prepared for the winter. And after some time also the U.S. arrived in Italy and could defeat them. So in 1943 Italy capitulated. Than together with France, the United Kingdom and the Soviet Union they pushed deeper into Germany.
Many states, like Hamburg and Dresden, were bombed. On the 30th April 1945 Adolf Hitler begun to suicide and Germany capitulated. But the 2nd World War wasn’t over, because the japanese continued fighting against the U.S. So 2 atomic bombs where thrown on 2 japanese cities, Hiroshima and Nagasaki.
150.000 people died instantly and about 110.000 died from the effects of the atomic bomb, for example cancer.
Even today, children are born with disabilities in these regions.
So the 2nd World War was over.
ich habe hier einen Text, den ich selbst geschrieben habe.
Dies soll als Vorlage für einen 5 Min Vortrag dienen.
Ist etwas, sowohl inhaltlich als auch sprachlich zu verbessern?
D.h. wenn euch beispielsweise ein besserer Beginn einfällt, bitte bescheid sagen, danke schön!!
Our topic is the time step from the 1940th up to the 1960th.
So we will tell you something about the 2nd Wold War, the atomic bombs and the cold war.
The Second World War was the largest conflict in histoire, in which more than 55 mio. people died.
It started on the 1st September 1939 with the attack from Germany on Poland. Germany was run by Adolf Hitler. His ideology was to destroy all ethnic groups in the world and occupy their countries, especially the Jews.
But before he attacked Poland he signed a non-aggression pact with the Soviet Union. So there was no country which could defend Poland. After Poland Germany occupied the northern countries like Denmark and Norway than the southern ones like the North African countries, which where colonies of France and the United Kingdom and at least they spread out in the west and occupied the Benelux countries and a part of France.
Germany formed an alliance with Italy and Japan. These 3 countries were called the Axis Powers.
After that they cancelled the non-aggression pact with the Soviet Union and attacked them also.
Up to this time the Axis Powers were very successful and occupied many countries but Hitler did a logical mistake. He wanted to much and so at least there where to many countries against the Axis Powers.
In the Soviet Union they got their first defeat, because they were not prepared for the winter. And after some time also the U.S. arrived in Italy and could defeat them. So in 1943 Italy capitulated. Than together with France, the United Kingdom and the Soviet Union they pushed deeper into Germany.
Many states, like Hamburg and Dresden, were bombed. On the 30th April 1945 Adolf Hitler begun to suicide and Germany capitulated. But the 2nd World War wasn’t over, because the japanese continued fighting against the U.S. So 2 atomic bombs where thrown on 2 japanese cities, Hiroshima and Nagasaki.
150.000 people died instantly and about 110.000 died from the effects of the atomic bomb, for example cancer.
Even today, children are born with disabilities in these regions.
So the 2nd World War was over.
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