ich soll für den englisch unterrricht einen text mit tipps zur verhinderung des klimawandels schreiben. da dieser bewertet wird und ich lieder nicht der beste in englisch bin, wollte ich mal nachfragen, ob einer von den schlauen köpfen hier, sich den text mal ansehen könnte und gegebenfalls korrigiert. bedanke mich schonmal...
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Climate Change Action Plan
The Climate Change Action Plan consists of ideas with those one tries to stop the climate change. One important point is that all people in London do not have to reduce their standard of living. But every person has to change the way they live.
The main idea is that the public have to move from a high energy-use and wasteful economic concept to a concept with minimizes waste. The keyword is thus “efficient”, then without efficient are all these ideas not possible to convert. Only if we invest now in new engines, machines etc. to reduce the CO2 emission we can slow the climatic change down and we has these problems not in the future where it could become more expensive or it is already offering no prospects.
A good example is e.g. the offer at public means of transport, where London should be already a good example of other cities. Also the new express train “euro star” is to be preserved a good possibility the environment. Particularly if it should be fast and favorable, the people should fall back to it. The “euro star” drives into 2 hours and 50 minutes from London to Paris and is not half like that environment damaging like cars. Straight ones for longer routes should be used these possibilities. In addition, flying should be used from a distance off 350 km that resulted in recently a new study.
mfg mirado
